Kỹ Sư Chủ Chốt
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Join date : 30/08/2010
Age : 28
Đến từ : I come from Bac Ninh province ( tôi ko hy vọng, tôi chỉ có niềm tin, tôi không thất vọng mà chỉ là thử thách )
|Tiêu đề: Describing Vung Tau city Thu May 12, 2011 2:28 pm|| |
Vung Tau city
Vung Tau city is always busy on the weekend. Every
weekend, it attracts a lot of tourists coming to enjoin fresh air, soft breeze
from the sea, to swim in the sea, to climb a little mountain. Along the beach,
there are many vendors selling a lot of variety souvenirs so that they can buy
them for their friends. Recently, they have been not only building the
car-cable at the front beach for tourists can observe the sea and the city from
above but also building more hotels and guest houses not to only welcome thousands
of tourists from different parts of our country but also many foreign tourists.
Besides that, coming to Vung Tau, you are able to sight
many wonderful landscapes such as Villa blanche, the lighthouse, statue of
Jesus Christ and parks. To visit to Villa blanche at Dau beach, you will know
about Vietnamese history and Bao Dai who is the last King in Vietnam. The cost of entrance
ticket is not expensive, only
five thousands. You can also observe the sea, enjoin wind, see cannons,
take photograph and drink coffee there.
In the front park on Quang Trung street
near the youth cultural house, you are able to read books to relax to widen
your knowledge. Even you can also walk, have a picnic and observe boats and
ships. Especially, on national holidays there are a lot of people. It is also a
place to date your lover or your friends. Besides that, you will meet many
foreigners. You can study English and exchange culture with them. You should
exercise there to breathe clean air for good health and take a rest.
In the morning, if you always get up early,
you and your girlfriend can go to the front beach to watch the sunrise.
In the evening, you had better go
to the back beach to listen to the splashing sound of waves lapping on the shore.
That is romantic.
If you need to come somewhere
then taxis are available in Vung Tau city however they are rather expensive. If
you do not want to spend a lot on taxi, you are able to take xe om. But now it
is required to wear helmets therefore you should wear your helmet. If the
Police catches you not wearing helmet, you will pay the fine.
Whenever you need a double-bike, you are able
to rent it at the front beach area beside the children cultural house or on
pavements along the back beach near hotels area.
If you want to enjoin seafood,
you should go to Ganh Hao restaurant that is famous place in Vung Tau city.
There waiters and waitresses are professional. When you go there, they welcome
you nicely and always smile during the time they serve you. There seafood is
fresh and delicious because it has the saltiness of the sea water.
Indeed, I like to live in Vung
Tau city because it is quiet.
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Join date : 04/07/2010
Kỹ Sư Chính
Tổng số bài gửi : 11
Join date : 22/02/2011
Đến từ : Hà Nội, Việt Nam
|Tiêu đề: Re: Describing Vung Tau city Fri May 13, 2011 5:46 am|| |
enjoin -> enjoy
so that they can buy them for their friends -> so that tourists can buy for their friends
they have been not only building the car-cable -> who r they??? Besides, long sentence.
Besides that -> Besides or otherwise
you are able to -> you can/may, "able to" refers to skills and abilities
sight -> go sightseeing
who is the last King -> who was the last king, "is" is acceptable
five thousands -> five thousand VNDs, btw, this is acceptable too
enjoin -> this mistake again
to relax to widen your knowledge -> check structure
exchange -> find better word, culture is not for sale or business =))
to come somewhere -> to go somewhere, maybe come & go are different sometimes
able to take XE OM -> no idea =)), maybe u should notice XE OM is a motorcycle taxi
it is required to wear helmets -> not so good, try another sentence
If the Police catches you not wearing helmet, you will pay the fine -> why not 2nd conditional sentence?
double-bike -> the name is Tandem bicycle
famous place -> only famous is enough
Indeed, I like to live in Vung Tau city because it is quiet << Same to me, hope to hear from u next time. Btw, "like living in VT", check like to V & live Ving.
|Tiêu đề: Re: Describing Vung Tau city Today at 5:50 pm|| |